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Anybody who knows about police procedure would be helpful. [Oct. 7th, 2006|08:07 pm]
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[ingriam]
This is the scene I'm having trouble with:

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The longhaired Japanese man was glaring at him again, like it was his fault that he and his boy had been found breaking the law.

“Now, are you going to tell me just what you were doing with all those explosives?” Sergeant James Brewster demanded.

Anata wa baka yaro desu.”

“Hey, we speak English here, pal.”

Kudaranai yatu,” the man snapped.

There was a definite derisive note in the man’s voice, that combined with the way the man turned to look at the wall to his right and the expression on his face when he did, let Sergeant Brewster know that he’d probably just been insulted.

“Where’s Kenji?” the man demanded, before Sergeant Brewster could start to say anything else.

“He’s safe, but you should worry more about yourself, sir. You’re in a lot of trouble,” Brewster said, trying to be understanding.

People always seemed to talk more when they were comfortable. But Brewster suspected that he was wasting his time with this guy.

“That wasn’t what I asked, stupid. Where’s my son?”

“He’s safe,” Brewster said again.

“He’s dead if I’m not there,” the man snarled. “Now where is he?”

Brewster wrote that statement down.
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